The Jewel (The Lone City, #1) – A Review

JewelViolet used to live in the Marsh, the poorest area of the One City. But she possesses a genetic variation that allows her to manipulate the world around her using what is called the Auguries. This makes her perfect to be a surrogate, to carry the child of the royalty who can no longer give birth to healthy children do to inbreeding. Once this was revealed, Violet is taken from her family and put into a special school where she is trained to use the Auguries.

At 16, Violet is sold at auction to the Duchess of the Lake and stripped of her name. The Duchess has an ambitious plan to have Violet produce a daughter within three months to be betrothed to the new born Elector (the title of the One City’s ruler). Once this is done, Volet will be steralized and sent to live the rest of her life at a retirement facility. Meanwhile her best friend Raven, who is also a surrogate, is starting to behave strangely.  Violet begins to suspect that there might be more going on than she has been told. Can she take action to save herself and her friend?

This is a distopian YA novel that marries the Handmaid’s Tale to the Selection. It had the potential of eing BRILLIANT, but the author AMy Ewing threw in a romance for Violet.  While well written, it was unnecessary and detracted from the main story. It would have been much better if the story had just been focused on VIolet’s journey into the Jewel, her realization that something wrong is going on and then her beginning to fight back.  To have the revel hinge on the romance reduced Violent from a freedom fighter to the victim of a Victorian melodram.

Only for the rue YA distopian fan.

The Heir – A review

I loved the first installment of this series, The Selection.  I literally fell into the book and emerged excited and in love with a new author.  I followed America through the rest of the series, thrilled that author Cass found a way to look at a reality tv dating show in a way that made the women likeable.  The follow up books were good, but they were not to the same level as the first one.

Often the longer series go one, the worse they get.  This is especially true when an author decides to come back to a finishesed series and add a new book or 1000.  (Piers Anthony, I am looking at you.)  So it was with mixed feelings that I picked up The Heir by Kiera Cass from my local book pusher a.k.a. The Library.

So when I saw The Heir, I got excited but I also thought about how series can be a tale of diminishing returns.  Well two days after I picked this book up, I am done.  Cass has done the next to impossible, made the fourth book of a series as good as a first.

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This book tells the story of Eadlyn, the eldest child of America and Maxom and, by seven minutes, the heir to the thone of Ileya. She has been raised to be queen and is a strong, compentent young woman. Eadlyn has also been raised on the stories of her parents’ romance and knows she doesn’t ever want that.  Instead, she has held herself alook from her peers and is seen is quite reserved.

But though her parents have desolved the caste system of old, there is disillusionment as the youth of the country find it difficult to get jobs and move ahead, because caste prejudices are ingrained.  There are riots and attacks.  America and Maxom feel that the population need a distraction while they figure out a way to help their people. They approach Eadlyn with the idea of to have a Selection to choose a husband.

Initially Eadlyn is intially horrified with this idea. Her parents have promised to never to marry her off to a foriegn prince, how was this different? But she agrees to do it under certain conditions, which includes that she doesn’t have to marry the winner if she doesn’t want to.  Eadlyn sees this as a win-win situation where she can help her parents and gain her freedom at the same time.  She has every intention of chasing away the boys as fast as possible and not investing herself in the process.

But, as she moves through the process, she discovers several things. One, she is not beloved by her people as she believes. They are angry and the monarchy might not survive the death of her parents.  Two, that her parents’ romance isn’t as storied as she was lead to believe. They never told her details about Maxon’s father’s attempts to control the process, nor about America’s fight with Celeste.   Three, and most important, Eadlyn learns that she can’t control the Selection process.  The men will not be puppets, as they apparently have hopes, dreams and agendas of their own. Worse, she is developing feelings towards some of the men, something she never dreamed possible.

Eadlyn is a a strong, often headstrong, lead to this story. She has been raised her whole life to be queen.  Her morning mantra is “You are Eadlyn Schreave. You are the next person in line to run this country, and you will be the first girl to do it on your own.  No one is as powerful as you.” Eadlyn is difficult and, at times, her own worst enemy. She makes painful mistakes, and comes off rude and self-centered.  Yet at the same time, she is portrayed as an atractive young woman that is desirable beyond her crown. Yes, some of the men in the Selection are there because they are attracted to the wealth and titles they would get by marrying Eadlyn, but others find her beautiful and are attracted to her strength and intelligence.

To have a romantic lead in a teen romance be a woman with all the power is AMAZING (she can have people killed) and Cass handles that remarkably well in her writing. For that reason alone, you should read this book, but the book is also full of characters that entice you and pull you in.  Cass has also written the book in the first person, a technique that tends to pull me in faster.  The books ends on a cliffhanger, so there is at least another book featuring Eadlyn in the future, something I am thrilled about.

Go get this.

The Elite – A Long Winded Review

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Imagine a distopian future world where North America where your birth determined your job.  It is a society divided into clases, with each class only allowed to do certain jobs.  Over all of them sit the Ones, the royal family that rules the land.  And every generation, the next Queen is chosen from the people through a process known as “The Selection”, a televised competition where one representative is chosen from each province to compete for the Crown Prince’s hand.  Did we mention that not everyone is happy about the situation and that rebels routinely attack the palace while this whole thing is goin on?

Sounds like The Bachelor meets Cinderella meets The Hunger Games, doesn’t it?

Enter into this world America Singer, a lowley Five from a family of artisits.  At te end of the first book, The Selection,  she has somehow made it past the initial 35 candidates to the Elite stage to be one of the final six competitors for the Prince’s hand.  She entered the competition on a dare and stayed only because her family gets a payment for every week she is in the competition.  America, or Mer, as she’s known to her friends, came into the competition in love with another boy, a Six named Aspen, but she finds herself drawn to Prince Maxon with each passing day.  Can she make a choice?

This is the second book in the Selection series, and while the first one was a hard to put own, this installment is mostly just America feeling closer to Maxon, but then something happens that distances them from each other. Usually it’s Maxon going on a date with another Elite, or America feeling a pull towards her former love, Aspen, who is convieniently a guard at the palace.  There is also the problem of suspending your disbelief long enough to believe that the all powerful King Clarkson, who can have anyone killed at a whim, is weak enough to allow for repeated (and I mean repeated) attacks on the palace.

Still, author Kiera Cass has created a solid teen romance that appeals to the YA crowd. If you look on line, you will see Team Maxon and Team Aspen camps with members  fiercly loyal to each camp.  So she has succeded in keeping her audience happy, although this feels like a filler book because YA series need to at least be trilogies now a days.

3 out of 5 Revolutions.